Introduction//
(導入)
Although eco-tourism might have some downsides, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.//
First body paragraph//
(メリットを説明)
The main advantage is that we can provide financial support for conservation.//
According to a survey, for example, the quality of life among Costa Ricans living in a protected area has improved by 16%, thanks to eco-tourism.//
There are also many other areas enjoying eco-tourism revenue.//
Second body paragraph//
(デメリットを説明)
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to eco-tourism, too.//
It can change wildlife behavior.//
For example, in Kenya, tourist jeeps scare away lions so they cannot get to their food.//
As a result, they have to change their hunting habits.//
Conclusion//
(結論)
In conclusion, despite the challenges, I believe that the advantages of eco-tourism are far greater than the disadvantages.//
Although eco-tourism might have some downsides, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.//
The main advantage is that we can provide financial support for conservation.//
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to eco-tourism, too.//
In conclusion, despite the challenges, I believe that the advantages of eco-tourism are far greater than the disadvantages.//